Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Ada, Malaki....and Destiny?

ALRIGHT!!! I got a Swahili name for Blade!!!!! Malaki means Blade by the way, LOL!!! Okay, I know there are people out there......not sure who... are like.... wanting to kill me for ending the previous story....yeah...but look! Another story! LOL! It's really short, but...umm..yeah. Although I should say that the ending was pretty darn good, hahaha!!!!! So, in this story, Ada and Malaki get in trouble when 2 rouge lions who after their territory. When one of their friends, Anga, got murdered, Ada have to face trouble on her own.....ENJOY!!!!

   Malaki was at a dark location, and he has no where to go. He was tired, and aching all over his body. He stopped and layed down. He didn't feel like continuing, and he just died with all the injuries he had on his body. Then somewhere in the darkness, a light blue light was growing. It was transforming and it turned into a figure of a lioness. She has bright blue eyes and a silver cresent of a moon on her forehead. She went closer to the teenager and said something to him. Some of her light went into him...
  "Malaki?" Malaki woke up and he was feeling very hot, he found himslef breathing hard. "Malaki... are you alright?" He looked next to him and his friend, Ada was there. Since it was night, the only thing that you could see of her was her bright large red iris, that had a small pupil, and the bright yellow of her eyes. You couldn't see both of her eyes, since some of her mane was covering her other eye. A lock was over her nose to the other "open eye."
   "Um.... yeah Ada.....*sigh* I'm alright..." All you could see of Malaki was his dark red eyes, and his pupils were slits, and you could see the shadows of the spikes of his mane.
  "Do you want to talk about it?"
  "....no.....Goodnight."
  "Goodnight." and the two friends went back to sleep.
   Morning came and Malaki woke up. Just to make sure, he was doing his morning roars, to tell any rouge lions that this territiry was taken, and it should never be tresspased. He stood up and stretched. He necklace, a small blade, touched the ground, making clinging noises. His spiky mane going from his head all the way down his tail, where his tail tuft had a strange spiky form. His underbelly fur were also spikes, and so was the mane that was on his chest. His disspearing black ear rims were spikes. He has 2 small scars on his nose, 3 scars under his chin, and 2 scars over his right eye. He has a dark colored fur that had a bit of red in it. He smelled the air, wondering where Ada was. He went to the watering hole and took a drink. Malaki was remembering the strange dream he had last night.
   Who was that lioness? He thought. There was rustling in the bushes and Ada came. She has a black mane, that has a bit of blond in the end of 2 small parts on her mane adn at the end of the lock over her muzzle. She had 2 long locks that have blong parts in the end. She also had a necklace: A broken heart, in two pieces and on one chain. Her dark colored fur was very easy to notice in the grass. Her scars, a large one on her right arm, another large one on her right side, and three slashes on her left arm. She has a gold band on her left arm, and it had a zig-zag design. Her tail had a ring, that had a heart on it, and on her right paw, has a black glove.
  "Morning Malaki."
  "Good morning Ada." The two friends nuzzled.
  "So...." Ada started. Malaki looked at his friend.
  "Soooo?" He asked, his ears down in confusion.
  "So! Aren't you going to tell me what you dreamt?!"
  "Fine..... okay, so what happened was this: I was running-"
  "Yeaaah?" Ada said with an annoying voice. Malaki looked at her in a mean way and continued.
  "So, I was running and was starting to feel all weak, like.... I was ill or..something. I just... laid down on the ground and.....died-"
  "*gasp*"
   "And then.....okay this was a wierd part." Ada had a deaf ear, the left one, but she raised them both up to listen more carefully. "This light....this....blue light.. it was shining and then...it turned into a figure of a lioness. She said something...but I don't remember what." Malaki ended and looked at his reflection in the water.
  "Ooooh!!!! Your gonna get a mate!" Ada said with joy.
  "What?"
   "Yeah! Obviously this lioness is very importnat! She;s gonna come Malaki! She;s gonna come! Your mate! She;s gonna come!" Ada had her face near Malaki.
  "Shut up and back off! This lioness is not gonna be my mate! And what do you know? You don;t have fortunte telling in your blood."
   "Yeah, but I still have a feeling that this blue light is the light to your heart!"
   "Okay, now I know you drank something bad in the water." Malaki joked.
   "Oh! Just watch! When she comes, your gonna......let's see.....oh! Your gonna go on moring patrol from now on!"
   "And if you're wrong?"
  "Then I'll do morning patrol."
  "Oh, You're on!" Malaki and Ada twined up together their long tails and agreed with the dare."Get ready to lose, cub!"
   "Alright, let's go hunt!"Ada said, jumping towards the hunting grounds
   "What? Wait! Ada! Now? Are you serious? I just woke up!"
   "Sooo!! I'm hungry! And I bet you are too!"
   "I am not-" But Malaki's stomach roared in hunger. Ada looked at her friend's stomach, than at him. "......fine."
   In the Border of the Darklands, two male rouges came over a hill and gazed over the amazing Darklands.
  "Brother, look at these lands," One of them started. "All of this will soon be ours." This lion had a dark brown mane, light colored fur, but darker than King Simba's fur, green eyes and a pointed nose.
   "Are you serious Choyo? Are these lands really going to be ours?" asked the other. He has a black mane, light brown fur, blue eyes and a pointed nose like his brother's.
  "Yes! What did I just say Mjinga?!" yelled Choyo.
  "I;m sorry! I was just...asking?"
  "Ugh, idiot. Yes, Mjinga, these lands will be ours."
  "How? There are lions who already own this territory."
  "Not necessaraly..."
  "What do you mean?"
  "These lands are ruled by teenagers."
  "Why don't we just go then?" Mjinga was already making his way pass the border, but his brother stopped him by going in front of him and roaring.
  "NO! These aren;t regular adolscents, you idiot. Malaki, one of the 2, is one of the strongest killers, second to Prince Kovu in the Pridelands. The second teenager, a girl named Ada, has the powers of the Shetanis. She also has same stong energy, but not as strong as her friend. We must wait, Mjinga, for the time to be right."
  "How are you going to get the Darklands then?"
  "A wildebbest will help us. He is a few miles away, he will come. We have made  a deal. In the meantime.... we have to stay here..." The two brothers stayed in teh grass for cover and saw the two teenager having a succesful hunt, and an eagle, flying over the Darklands and gliding to the teenagers to tell some news. 
  "Hello." said the eagle.
  "Hey Anga, what's up?" Ada said as she devoured the gazzelle.
  "Well, your highnesses-"
  "*growl* Can you stop calling us that, Anga? We are not King and Queen here! We're freinds ruling a land. We are nothing royal! Even though cubby here is one." Malaki said.
  "Hey! WAAAZZZ! I don't want to be a To-Be-Queen anymore anyway. Furaha can take the throne for all I care." Ada said, her eyes rolling.
  "Alright, fine, sorry! Geez, you guys are so rude. And I'm a teenager!" Anga yelled
  "Well, what are ya gonna do?" Malaki laughed. "So *chew* whrat wraz it you groana tell urs?" Malaki muffled with his mouth full.
  "Right, well, I got news from the Pridelands that hyenas are coming this way to the Darklands."
  "Really? Hmm.... hyenas..... in the Darklands? Don;t they live in the..... what is it?? Oh! Don;t they hyenas live in the Outlands? Y'know, with all those bones and stupid cubs who always go in there and then get killed?" Ada asked. She had a smile on he face, because the small humor of cubs going in there was funny, because they are so meschivious and don't listen to their parents.
  "Yeah, I heard that these two cubs, years ago, went in there. Lucky that their daddy was there to save them!" Anga said. "Yeah, but there are still more news. Hippos say that the water will be heading to another direction, so there would be a drought here in a few days."
  "Are you serious?! A few days?! Where are we gonna go?! We can;t go to my father's land! And this little Discrace here wouldn;t be accepted from her family!" Malaki said standing up. Ada stood up and hit the back of her friend's head with her paw.
  "Shut up, Malaki. My family would understand. If not, we could just go to my Uncle's land. So stop worrying like some female human! Some of them scream whenever they see mice. 'Ah! Ew! It's a mice! Ah! Get the foul thing away from me!' Clearly, its amazing how they're able to live. They give a bad name to females I tell ye. I'm so gald that there are female humans who can handle a rat." 
  "I hear ya. It;s wierd how some male humans are lucky enought to escape a Lion's grasp." the male lion put his pw up and released his calws. "And they think that we lions are man eaters! What a rumor! Sure, we kill them, but we don;t eat them! I bet that the lion who started it was just some hungry old rouge!"
  "Are you done with your talk now?" Anga asked. "I think it;s very important that we get a move on! The drought will be coming soon!"
  "Anga, don;t worry about a thing. We'll leave just in time." Ada went down and nuzzled her feathery friend. " Nothing bad will happen."

  Well, that's the first part to ya! If anyone thinks that the whole "woman and human" thing is bad, go ahead! I wont care what you would say! I hate humans anyway, so yeah, call me dumb 'cause I just called myself stupid 'cause I am human. WELL I HATE BEING HUMAN! 
   I need to get more interseting topics for my future stories. Too much "Ada". LOL!! I'm serious! In almost every drawing, EVERY SINGLE ONE, she's in there, in Lion King, Original. Larkos or Cougar form, she's there! LOL!!!

-Ada Shadow~Dark Pearl
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  • kim r's Avatar
    Posted by kim r Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:14pm PDT

    Okay, now I am happy and ready for the next adventure! Good to have you back Ada, I really missed thes stories.

    BTW, being human is not all that bad, how many lions you know that can type. yuk yuk

    Keep me posted on the many chapters to come. SMOOCHES

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  • dolphin™'s Avatar
    Posted by dolphin™ Sun Jun 14, 2009 9:52pm PDT

    Ada,

    Amazing!

    It's like watching a movie with subtitles!

    Very visual words My Story writting Genious!

    Loved it!!

    More more more,

    And what would it be without Ada, don't you dare remove her.

    She { YOU } are the Heroine of the Land!

    Bravisimo! Standing Ovation!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Dark Force of Nature™'s Avatar
    Posted by Dark Force of Nature™ Sun Jun 14, 2009 10:36pm PDT

    Shaka Zulu

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1kDG1wlkT4

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  • e R i's Avatar
    Posted by e R i Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:53am PDT

    Lioness!

    *hugssss u warm and tight*

    I am glad to read from you this morning...

    and by the way, who is ur inspiration when u wrote this???

    great work Ada!!

    have a great day!!!

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  • LADY-JANE's Avatar
    Posted by LADY-JANE Mon Jun 15, 2009 1:37pm PDT

    MAMA BEAR IS SITTING ON BUM AND VERY HAPPY TO SEE/READ A SHORT STORY TOO.........HUGE HUGZZZZZZZ MY SWEET YOUNG LADY, WITH THE TALENT BEYOND HER YOUNG YEARZZZZZZZZ........YUPPPPPPPP, YOU SWEETY~~~~~~~~~~~

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:44pm PDT

    How are you?? I have a new birthday post up!

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Tue Jun 16, 2009 9:35am PDT

    Good Job!

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  • __A_YAHOO_USER__'s Avatar
    Posted by __A_YAHOO_USER__ Tue Jun 16, 2009 2:22pm PDT

    Gosh Ada, another sequel.....Now why didn't I see that coming?...C.

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  • Brittany's Avatar
    Posted by Brittany Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:29pm PDT

    Hey what about fairies....

    btw you are funny i found your about you section absolutely hysterical :D

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  • GirlyGirl©'s Avatar
    Posted by GirlyGirl© Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:40pm PDT

    Ada! Where are you, sweetie?

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