Alright, so here is part 2 of my new story. To
remind you, it will not be a mega large story like my previous one.
I have another story like that after this one, and yes, it has Ada
in it, LOL! So, enjoy this second
chapter!!!!!
As the Darklands was dark and quiet, and everyone is
asleep, Malaki was shivering in his nightmare. He was having the
same dream again...
As the small blue light was transforming into a
lioness, She was starting to come closer to the dead teenager. Some
of her blue light was shimmering towards Malaki.
"You can't be dead." She said. "You
can't be immortal either. You must live and help your
friend. She's in danger......" and that last word was
repeating in his head...
Malaki woke up and he
stood up. He was breathing hard and was looking around. Next to
him, sleeping, was Ada. He looked up to the stars, wondering what
lives were up there and what they were doing.
".......am I really going to die?" Malaki asked in
a whisper. He laid back down and went back to sleep. Ada was about
to sleep too, for she was awake the moment she felt her friend
breathing hard. She knows that he's scared for that dream to
come true. She looked up at the stars, and went to sleep.
Day. Malaki woke up and once again, he was alone. He
stretched and did his morning roars. He sniffed the air and smelled
that Ada is at the water hole. He yawned and went out of the cave
and went his way to the water hole. The teenager liones was looking
at her reflection in the water. She was worried about her friend.
How scared he is. The lioness can't help to think that trouble
will come. Will her Shetani be the reason why?
"Morning Ada." Malaki said as he went next
to his friend.
"Morning Malaki." And the two friends
nuzzled eachother. Malaki had a smile on his face, but Ada was
still looking at her reflection, and Malaki's. Malaki knew
what was on her dark mind.
"Hey..... Ada,...... cheer up. I'm sure
nothing bad will happen." Ada looked into Malaki's dark
red slit pupil eyes and said,
"Your lying."
"How do you know?" Malaki said in an anxious
way.
"Malaki, I have the Shamer's eyes too,
remember? I can see if your lying or not."
"Those things freak me out cause your eyes turn a bit
green when you do that. When do you not use it?"
"When I don't need it. They can disspaear
too."
"How? I thought that Shamer's had their gift for
like...ever. They never look into other people's eyes. Only if
they want to "shame" someone. They have a voice too?
Like.......real loud and all."
"Yes, those are the qualities of a Shamer, but I
have it differently. I just got them from my mother's side.
Generations, so I think some traits are gone. Anyway, they can
dissapear in anytime they want. It's like they have a mind of
their own. It can be dangerous too, cause it can caome when I
don't need it. it's confusing, but I'll find a way to
learn how to use them."
"Why not go to that one Mandrill in the Pridelands?
That....ugh... Rafiki! Yeah! Why not go to him?"
"No, I have to go to someone who HAS the gift and who
can teach me. My dad won't say a word 'cause he'll
think that I'll abuse it. So, no hope, I guess I'll lose
them as soon as I turn into an adult."
"No, c'mon, don;t say-"
"Guys!!!" Malaki was interrupted when Anga came
over flying. "Guys! Hurry! There's trouble in the
Darklands!!"
"What kind of trouble?!" Malaki asked.
"There's not time, hurry! Follow me!" and the
two lions follwed Anga as he was flying. They were heading their
way towards the river, where most of the animals drink, swim and
play. There were hippos roaring at eachother and crocidiles trying
to get out of teh way, protecting their young little crocs. Mother
hippos are protectign their young and bringing them at some other
part of the river. Choyo and Mjinga went to see what was going on,
but was still at the border of the Darklands. Malaki jumped to a
rock, with Ada next to him and they both roared.
"HEY! WHAT'S GOING ON HERE???!!!" Malaki
yelled. All of the animals bowed to the teenagers as they went
their way closer to the river. Ada was mad, but Malaki was furious.
A little crocidile went in their way, just to go on the other side.
it stopped and Ada carried it back to it's mother. "Did no
one here me?! What's going on here?!"
"Your highness," Started a Zebra "The hippos
were fighting territory on the river and have created a bit of
Havoc wherever they went."
"A BIT??!!" exclaimed a mother crocidile.
"They almost killed our young!" There were two male
hippos not looking at eachother and was the reason why there was a
fuss at teh river.
"Is the true?" Ada asked with geat fury in her
eyes. The hippos just looked at her and didn;t answer.
"Hello?! ARE YOU TWO RESPONSIBLE???!!"
"Well, I'm not, but that ugly face is." said
one of the hippos.
"Would you shut up??!!" said the other hippo.
"Why won;t you just walk away with your little
brain!!!!" The two hippos were roaring at eachther again and
was about to fight again.
"HEY!!" Malaki yelled. "Do BOTH of you really
want to be banished from my lands??!!" Malaki felt his claws
growing larger. Ada felt nothing but pure pity to these two
animals.
In the border, Choyo and Mjinga were a bit amazed on how the
teenager were ruling their Kingdom.
"Look at them. They think they are so poweful.
They don't know abou their own laws! It will be easy to rule
these lands..." Choyo said.
"But brother, you said they had gifts that
few lions would have. How can we beat them?"
"One of them have to go down." Choyo
chuckled. The two rouges looked at the river and saw that
everything was a peace onece more. "......What?!"
"The comotion ended! How did they do it?!" Mjinga
said.
"Rah! Their too intelligent. There must be and
another way to beat them. If we cant; cause havoc that they
can'e handle, then what must we do???"
"Choyo-"
"WHAT??!!"
"Listen, I have a plan. You know that messenger friend
of theirs?"
"Yeeesss...."
"We must get rid of him, so that the the young lions
won;t have any information about anything." Choyo was thinking
about Mjinga's plan and liked it.
"Perfect. Tommorow, brother....tommorow.....it
will be the beggining of the end...."
OH NO!!!!!!!!! Anga is in danger!!!!! What will Ada and
Malaki do??? Will Anga be safe or something?? Will the Darklands be
safe??? Guess and you will win an imagianry cookie! LOL!!!
-Ada Shadow~Dark Pearl
Wednesday, February 10, 2010
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Posted by Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:51pm PDT
Report AbuseHey, Ada...I hope you never stop writing. This is GREAT! I cannot wait until the next, the next after that, and the next after that. LOVE IT! Luvya, Lioness.
The Unicorn ♥
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Posted by Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:07pm PDT
Report AbuseAda, What are they planning?
Are you ok?
What is up with this Anga chick?
Is she going to be safe?
I can't wait to read the next part.
It was great!
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Posted by Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:22pm PDT
Report AbuseAda,
The eagle will soar!!!
Danger maybe, but they all will prevail!
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Posted by Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:36pm PDT
Report AbuseWow.. Good story I like the way you write it's very descriptive :)
Lion King is the bomb btw have you seen the musical yet?
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Posted by Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:26am PDT
Report Abusemorning Ada,
Oh I love the story...this makes me wanna be an animal and take part in their adventures lol!!
Keep'em coming
Have a fantastic day and weekend :)
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Posted by Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:57am PDT
Report AbuseAda thanks for stopping by my post! I know that you are worryed about me and you are a really good friend to have! Ada you are lovely girl with a great personaitly (if spelt wrong sorry) and you are like a little sister to me and I don't want to see you get hurt because of me. I love your posts they bring me happiness and I read your last story to my sons and they love that story!!!! Ada thank you so much for being there! You are an amazing friend!!! Love your crazy monkey friend
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Posted by Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:00pm PDT
Report AbuseHELLO MY LITTLE LIONESS THANKS FOR STOPPING BY. HERE IS A SPEACIL LION POEM FOR YOU MY LOVE.
LION
I ENJOY FRIGHTENING YOU HUMANS
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Posted by Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:16pm PDT
Report AbuseSORRY I'LL START AGAIN
ADA THE LIONESS
I ENJOY FRIGHTENING YOU HUMANS
IT IS GREAT FUN TO GROWL
TO SWITCH MY TAIL
FROM SIDE TO SIDE.
A GOLDEN TUFF FUR
KEEPS ME WARM IN WINTER
HIDES ME FROM SUMMER'S HEAT
AND BIG GOLDEN EYES
THAT WATCH
YOUR EVERY MOVE
THOUGH YOU CAN'T SEE ME.
YOU MAY NEVER UNDERSTAND MY BRAVERY.
IT IS ONLY WHEN YOU CAN BE A TRUE WARRIOR,
AS I AM,
THAT YOU WILL NEVER FIGHT
ONE ANOTHER AGAIN.
I HAVE A BIG VOICE
BUT A GENTLE HEART.
AND A SOFT PURR.
I CARRY FIRELIGHT
IN MY CLAWS
TO FRIGHTEN
THE SHADOWS AWAY.
MUCH LOVE BABY LIONESS LOL CASY
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