Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Ada, Malaki....and Destiny? Part 2 : The Beggining of the End

Alright, so here is part 2 of my new story. To remind you, it will not be a mega large story like my previous one. I have another story like that after this one, and yes, it has Ada in it, LOL! So, enjoy this second chapter!!!!!

   As the Darklands was dark and quiet, and everyone is asleep, Malaki was shivering in his nightmare. He was having the same dream again...
   As the small blue light was transforming into a lioness, She was starting to come closer to the dead teenager. Some of her blue light was shimmering towards Malaki.
  "You can't be dead." She said. "You can't be immortal either. You must live and help your friend. She's in danger......" and that last word was repeating in his head...
   Malaki woke up and he stood up. He was breathing hard and was looking around. Next to him, sleeping, was Ada. He looked up to the stars, wondering what lives were up there and what they were doing.
  ".......am I really going to die?" Malaki asked in a whisper. He laid back down and went back to sleep. Ada was about to sleep too, for she was awake the moment she felt her friend breathing hard. She knows that he's scared for that dream to come true. She looked up at the stars, and went to sleep.
   Day. Malaki woke up and once again, he was alone. He stretched and did his morning roars. He sniffed the air and smelled that Ada is at the water hole. He yawned and went out of the cave and went his way to the water hole. The teenager liones was looking at her reflection in the water. She was worried about her friend. How scared he is. The lioness can't help to think that trouble will come. Will her Shetani be the reason why?
   "Morning Ada." Malaki said as he went next to his friend.
   "Morning Malaki." And the two friends nuzzled eachother. Malaki had a smile on his face, but Ada was still looking at her reflection, and Malaki's. Malaki knew what was on her dark mind.
   "Hey..... Ada,...... cheer up. I'm sure nothing bad will happen." Ada looked into Malaki's dark red slit pupil eyes and said,
  "Your lying."
  "How do you know?" Malaki said in an anxious way.
   "Malaki, I have the Shamer's eyes too, remember? I can see if your lying or not."
  "Those things freak me out cause your eyes turn a bit green when you do that. When do you not use it?"
  "When I don't need it. They can disspaear too."
  "How? I thought that Shamer's had their gift for like...ever. They never look into other people's eyes. Only if they want to "shame" someone. They have a voice too? Like.......real loud and all."
   "Yes, those are the qualities of a Shamer, but I have it differently. I just got them from my mother's side. Generations, so I think some traits are gone. Anyway, they can dissapear in anytime they want. It's like they have a mind of their own. It can be dangerous too, cause it can caome when I don't need it. it's confusing, but I'll find a way to learn how to use them."
  "Why not go to that one Mandrill in the Pridelands? That....ugh... Rafiki! Yeah! Why not go to him?"
  "No, I have to go to someone who HAS the gift and who can teach me. My dad won't say a word 'cause he'll think that I'll abuse it. So, no hope, I guess I'll lose them as soon as I turn into an adult."
  "No, c'mon, don;t say-"
  "Guys!!!" Malaki was interrupted when Anga came over flying. "Guys! Hurry! There's trouble in the Darklands!!"
  "What kind of trouble?!" Malaki asked.
  "There's not time, hurry! Follow me!" and the two lions follwed Anga as he was flying. They were heading their way towards the river, where most of the animals drink, swim and play. There were hippos roaring at eachother and crocidiles trying to get out of teh way, protecting their young little crocs. Mother hippos are protectign their young and bringing them at some other part of the river. Choyo and Mjinga went to see what was going on, but was still at the border of the Darklands. Malaki jumped to a rock, with Ada next to him and they both roared.
  "HEY! WHAT'S GOING ON HERE???!!!" Malaki yelled. All of the animals bowed to the teenagers as they went their way closer to the river. Ada was mad, but Malaki was furious. A little crocidile went in their way, just to go on the other side. it stopped and Ada carried it back to it's mother. "Did no one here me?! What's going on here?!"
  "Your highness," Started a Zebra "The hippos were fighting territory on the river and have created a bit of Havoc wherever they went."
  "A BIT??!!" exclaimed a mother crocidile. "They almost killed our young!" There were two male hippos not looking at eachother and was the reason why there was a fuss at teh river.
  "Is the true?" Ada asked with geat fury in her eyes. The hippos just looked at her and didn;t answer. "Hello?! ARE YOU TWO RESPONSIBLE???!!"
  "Well, I'm not, but that ugly face is." said one of the hippos.
  "Would you shut up??!!" said the other hippo.
  "Why won;t you just walk away with your little brain!!!!" The two hippos were roaring at eachther again and was about to fight again.
  "HEY!!" Malaki yelled. "Do BOTH of you really want to be banished from my lands??!!" Malaki felt his claws growing larger. Ada felt nothing but pure pity to these two animals.
  In the border, Choyo and Mjinga were a bit amazed on how the teenager were ruling their Kingdom.
   "Look at them. They think they are so poweful. They don't know abou their own laws! It will be easy to rule these lands..." Choyo said. 
    "But brother, you said they had gifts that few lions would have. How can we beat them?"
   "One of them have to go down." Choyo chuckled. The two rouges looked at the river and saw that everything was a peace onece more. "......What?!"
  "The comotion ended! How did they do it?!" Mjinga said.
   "Rah! Their too intelligent. There must be and another way to beat them. If we cant; cause havoc that they can'e handle, then what must we do???"
  "Choyo-"
  "WHAT??!!"
  "Listen, I have a plan. You know that messenger friend of theirs?"
  "Yeeesss...."
  "We must get rid of him, so that the the young lions won;t have any information about anything." Choyo was thinking about Mjinga's plan and liked it.
   "Perfect. Tommorow, brother....tommorow.....it will be the beggining of the end...."

OH NO!!!!!!!!! Anga is in danger!!!!! What will Ada and Malaki do??? Will Anga be safe or something?? Will the Darklands be safe??? Guess and you will win an imagianry cookie! LOL!!!

-Ada Shadow~Dark Pearl

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  • GirlyGirl©'s Avatar
    Posted by GirlyGirl© Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:51pm PDT

    Hey, Ada...I hope you never stop writing. This is GREAT! I cannot wait until the next, the next after that, and the next after that. LOVE IT! Luvya, Lioness.

    The Unicorn ♥

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:59pm PDT

    Good Job! I love it!!!

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Thu Jun 18, 2009 3:07pm PDT

    Ada, What are they planning?

    Are you ok?

    What is up with this Anga chick?

    Is she going to be safe?

    I can't wait to read the next part.

    It was great!

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  • dolphin™'s Avatar
    Posted by dolphin™ Thu Jun 18, 2009 4:22pm PDT

    Ada,

    The eagle will soar!!!

    Danger maybe, but they all will prevail!

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  • Brittany's Avatar
    Posted by Brittany Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:36pm PDT

    Wow.. Good story I like the way you write it's very descriptive :)

    Lion King is the bomb btw have you seen the musical yet?

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Thu Jun 18, 2009 8:38pm PDT

    How are you? I have a new post up! Oh good job!

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  • anewperspective's Avatar
    Posted by anewperspective Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:26am PDT

    morning Ada,

    Oh I love the story...this makes me wanna be an animal and take part in their adventures lol!!

    Keep'em coming

    Have a fantastic day and weekend :)

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:57am PDT

    Ada thanks for stopping by my post! I know that you are worryed about me and you are a really good friend to have! Ada you are lovely girl with a great personaitly (if spelt wrong sorry) and you are like a little sister to me and I don't want to see you get hurt because of me. I love your posts they bring me happiness and I read your last story to my sons and they love that story!!!! Ada thank you so much for being there! You are an amazing friend!!! Love your crazy monkey friend

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  • casy's Avatar
    Posted by casy Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:00pm PDT

    HELLO MY LITTLE LIONESS THANKS FOR STOPPING BY. HERE IS A SPEACIL LION POEM FOR YOU MY LOVE.

    LION

    I ENJOY FRIGHTENING YOU HUMANS

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  • casy's Avatar
    Posted by casy Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:16pm PDT

    SORRY I'LL START AGAIN

    ADA THE LIONESS

    I ENJOY FRIGHTENING YOU HUMANS

    IT IS GREAT FUN TO GROWL

    TO SWITCH MY TAIL

    FROM SIDE TO SIDE.

    A GOLDEN TUFF FUR

    KEEPS ME WARM IN WINTER

    HIDES ME FROM SUMMER'S HEAT

    AND BIG GOLDEN EYES

    THAT WATCH

    YOUR EVERY MOVE

    THOUGH YOU CAN'T SEE ME.

    YOU MAY NEVER UNDERSTAND MY BRAVERY.

    IT IS ONLY WHEN YOU CAN BE A TRUE WARRIOR,

    AS I AM,

    THAT YOU WILL NEVER FIGHT

    ONE ANOTHER AGAIN.

    I HAVE A BIG VOICE

    BUT A GENTLE HEART.

    AND A SOFT PURR.

    I CARRY FIRELIGHT

    IN MY CLAWS

    TO FRIGHTEN

    THE SHADOWS AWAY.

    MUCH LOVE BABY LIONESS LOL CASY

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