I have been writing for a while and people tell me this one is
good. Tell me what you think.
Could Have Been
You told me not to listen to them: to push them out of my mind and
forget their words. I did. Then they came and told me you cheated
on me. They told me to get you back. They told me I deserved
better. They told me you would hurt me. They told me you used me.
They told me to leave you! Do you know how much I had to listen to
them? Do you know how much I had to go through? My heart had to go
through so much pain. I am confused and don’t
know who to listen to. So I decided to listen to them. I regret
that. When I walk by you I still fell your touch. When I see
you my heart still skips a beat. When I hear your voice I remember
when you used to talk to me and me alone. When I listen to
the radio I here our song and think of how we used to be. For a
while I just sat their thinking and getting more confused. I think
about how it could have been if I had stayed with you. I cry at
night about my choice. Without you my heart can only hurt. I have
seen you with other girls and I still wonder how it could have been
if I had stayed with you. But I had to listen to their lies and I
believed them! I could have been happy with you but I had to
listen. Why did I have to listen? Why? So now I wonder how it could
have been.
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