Tuesday, February 9, 2010

In Retrospect

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My life has been a B@!#$,

so punishments feel comfortable.

I've been hurt and h8ed til I aint so loveable.

Women I loved hate me and they hope I die misreable,

cause they scared of hell

 "I've been there in the physical."

I've survived in places where life aint livable

givin' parts of me I would have never thought givable.

Sometimes you hurt things that'll never be healable.

When you're ready to die the whole world turns biblical.

These words aint just words,

what I speak is more spiritual.

I'm the ghost got holy tryin' to make a damn miracle.

I know it's trivial rhyming words so visual

tryin' to be heard cause I'm tired of being invisible...

if only words, my wisdom would prove pityful

as lines kiss between curves

t'ward vitamins and minerals.

Experience drops with ev'ry drip of lyrical lickable

eargasms with no balance in the middle.

Oh well I tilted the scale, til it flipped off and fell

I'm too much and still more than some hateful a$$ stares.

They followed me close to never understand why I'd care

to love and be loved by someone who was always there.

By: The Silent Knight

Related: retrospect, reminising, old, new, love, change of heart

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  • Ms. Crys*'s Avatar
    Posted by Ms. Crys* Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:21pm PST

    I feel this way right now Micheal!!! what the Heck is going on<<>

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:39pm PST

    I like it! New post up!

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  • SILENT KNIGHT's Avatar
    Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:47pm PST

    Hello Nicole. This was just an old poem I decided to finish because I just remembered it today. I am very much in love and can't wait to delete all these poems. I'm just getting it all out. I've made many mistakes on my quest to get it all right and learned I'm only human no matter how much GOD has blessed me or how hard the Devil wants me to fail. I am so sick of sex and that's why I'd rather make love within the walls of consumation between me and my wife. My life is wonderful and amazing. I wish I could reveal the surprize ending to all my friends on shine, but my love, honor and respect for my privacy will not allow me to do so. These old and new expressions of my past mistakes are all I'm at liberty to share and I wish everyone else all the best in life.

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    Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:16pm PST

    I don't give advice because you are your own living proof. Through various trials and tribulations your life will only be as good as you allow and love the same. Just do whatever it is that you do because no one else can do you better than you. Besides that, keep it tight, shake it loose and don't stop, til you get enough.

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  • peacegirlalways's Avatar
    Posted by peacegirlalways Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:19pm PST

    that poem was so orignal and coming from the heart

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  • Sinister1's Avatar
    Posted by Sinister1 Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:07pm PST

    i feel like this

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  • Kristen's Avatar
    Posted by Kristen Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:49am PST

    I see that you have given alot of great insight to posts and was wondering if you could take a look at mine and provide some insight..It's this link here on shine..under love & sex..love..

    http://shine.yahoo.com/channel/sex/what-would-you-do-if-you-found-out-your-boyfriend-was-soliciting-himself-to-men-and-hooking-up-with-random-women-need-advice-544583/

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  • J.P.'s Avatar
    Posted by J.P. Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:13am PST

    I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT, BUT I ENJOYED THE POST AND MAYBE IF YOU HAVE THE TIME YOU CAN EXPLAIN YOUR POINT TO OLD J.P.! HOW DID YOU UPLOAD FROM YOUTUBE TO YOUR BLOG? NEW AT THIS. IN ANY CASE, ENJOY YOUR LIFE, YOU HAVE THIS ONE AND ONE MORE, SO DON'T LET ANYONE OR ANYTHING GET IN YOUR WAY! GOOD LUCK AND MAKE YOURSELF A WONDERFUL LIFE!! BYE-BYE J.P.

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:24am PST

    Awesome post!

    I am so glad that you are finally happy, hun.

    smooches!

    Click me~* I need advice ;)

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  • Cassandra's Avatar
    Posted by Cassandra Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:36am PST

    hey that was really great :)

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