Tuesday, December 8, 2009
just go
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- by Sinister1, on Fri Sep 11, 2009 10:17pm PDT
I can’t stop the tears
I’m feeling so unsteady
In my heart are fears
Your know I’m not ready
I can’t believe
I can’t receive
I can’t even hurt
More than now
You took my soul
Connected it to yours
Then turned and walked
Away from me
Don’t tell me you care
I no longer believe you
I’m not fine
I’m not okay
I’m bathing in pain
And you filled it
Nothing more to say
Can’t believe
This is how
Life goes on
I can’t stop the tears
I am still so not ready
In my heart it fears
It’s breaking like confetti
Just go
Don’t make me keep you
Just go
I never want to be a part of you
Just go
I now wish I never met you
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Posted by The Poet OS™ Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:39pm PDT
A very good poem, it is well written.
Have a good day, Tempy. :o)
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Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Wed Sep 30, 2009 6:51am PDT
You are very direct and to the point. I feel sad though about what's being expressed. I hope you feel better and if it helps any after you've broken your heart enough and all the tears run out, there will be nothing else left, but a stronger and better you. Love is a power that grows from the inside and shines through out. Besides that caterpillars turn into butterfly's. Ugly incidents sometimes have the most amazing results, but only time can tell you, so be strong, be patient and keep an open mind so pain wont clogg your heart. I wish you well.
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Posted by amanda Mon Oct 5, 2009 8:59am PDT
that was a very good poem i loved it.... it fits me perfectly with some one that i know...
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