"How much further?!" Megan yelled
from behind me. My legs were starting to hurt after almost an hour
of running. The distant rustling of branches from a ways away told
us our pursuer was gaining fast! I saw Megan running towards me,
she was slower then me so I had to stop for her to catch
up.
"The bridge is almost a mile away! But
we're never gonna make it!" I snapped at her, frustrated
from the fact that we were about to die! The rustling got closer! I
heard a thick snap of a tree branch. Megan and I turned
our heads and saw the silloeute of the creature! The moonlight
streamed through the tree canopy, we could finally see his face!
Absolute beauty laced with blood-thirsty menace! Six and a half
feet tall! His long black hair soft as silk and unmoving, like a
statue. His flaming red eyes paralyzed you completely. The white
skin like ivory. His flawless beauty made him all the more
horrifying! His pale, lush lips were smeared with blood and pulled
back to reveal a animal-like, blood-stained smile! The fangs were
razor-sharp and I knew how easily they had sliced through
Jerry's throat, like a knife through butter! That was her blood
on his mouth! The image of watching him rip her apart made me want
to fall to the ground and weep! The vicious vampire roared like a
lion and stalked towards us, there was no way in heck we would
make it! Megan started to back away, but she tripped over a tree
trunk. She sat on the ground, paralyzed with fear. The vampire
looked at her, then to me. He growled and jumped at Megan, because
she was weaker and she wouldn't be able to move as fast cuz she
was on the ground. "NO!!!" I screamed. I had no clue what
I was doing, all that I knew was I couldn't let him kill Megan
like he did Jerry! I jumped at him, latching onto his back, he
roared in anger and threw me like a ragdoll! I hit a tree and I
felt a sharp agonizing pain in my left arm, I looked and saw the
bone of my fore-arm jutting out through the skin! It was a gruesome
sight! I could feel the pain, but only just, the adrenaline rush
was still scorching! I grabbed a big, broken branch lying on the
ground with my right arm and threw it at the vamp. It hit him in
the back of the head; he didn't flinch but it made him mad! He
bolted towards me and hit me in the stomach. Just before I crumpled
to the ground, I sreamed at Megan: "RUN!!!" I saw her get
up from the ground and made a break for the trees, going South,
towards the bridge. If she made it to the bridge she would be safe.
The vampire kicked me hard in the side and I yelped in pain. He saw
Megan running and he turned to chase her, but I grabbed his ankle
and he drug me along. It wasn't until I grunted when my face
was scraped by a thorn bush that he realized I was attached to his
foot. He grabbed my hair and put his hand around my neck, he threw
me against another tree. When my head hit the hard bark, things got
all fuzzy. The vampire approached me, hunger flaming in his eyes. I
knew what he was about to do! He leaned down to me, fangs extended,
and he sunk his long canines into my throat! I screamed in pain. He
pulled away, stood and ran to chase Megan. My throat was burning
and I watched in horror as my blood spilled out across the ground.
The world around me slipped into blackness as the burning grew
worse and worse. Finally... a dark abyss comsumed my mind and
everything went numb... and fell threw emptyness... and embraced...
DEATH???
to be continued........
Monday, November 30, 2009
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Posted by Tue May 19, 2009 11:14pm PDT
Report AbuseI like it, but forgive me becasue I have a tendency to read into things too much and look 4 details...here goes; "That was her blood on his mouth!" Whose blood?? "Cuz" should only be used on this website and NOT in ur final print..."It was a gruesome sight." is self-explanatory-the readers already know that a protruding bone is totally hideous...other than that i thought it was great!!!
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