song

i wrote a song and i would like to here your opinion and sugestions thank you        When you do what you do i cant help but look at you your smile,your eyes,your beautiful face, your sendin my heart on a chace,yu take control of my heart,im tryin to pull you and her apart your getting closer and closer and closer to her but im not so sure she loves you the way i do she says (this is the chourse---->) she loves you but i dnt think she does whe i think about u in the background there is flying doves so think about it one more time does she love you.your txtin her your laughin and smilinim sittin here and pilin all the hearts i drew around your name lovin tht you dnt no i secretly love yah (chourse)i love you and thts a fact but i dnt lik the way you act you dnt love me so i guess your stuck with her even though im still not so sure....