What is love?
So that it hurts worse than anything on earth,
that's worth dying for, priceless as life seems,
through the eyes of innocense filled with hopes and dreams,
like the screams of my heartache, ev'rytime I wake,
praying to GOD to get a blessin' for goodness sake.
In these lakes of flaming tears tryin' to make paths
clear,
through my world full of confusion from year to year,
yet I hear, only my voice through a silence so loud
consumed by rare moments of peace like a walk on a cloud.
Riding winds that twist and bend cuddling my skin,
in a blanket of nothingness from the places I've been.
Feeling empty, alone and lost as I fade into dust
beggin' to feel the healing power of a delicate touch.
Be it so soft like sweet somethings wispered upon my ear
from the lips of yonder angel I held ever so dear,
yet appears often in dreams that I wish would come true,
because whatever love is I know I need some too.
What is Love?
By: The Silent Knight
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 9:06am PDT
Report AbuseI tear up as I read this, and I feel like a blubbering wreck. Love is starting to be a fantasy to me, and only attainable in my dreams. My reality is I have to put love on the back burner in order to be successful but *really* to achieve success for me is for my soulmate to find me. I used to think I knew what Love was, but it was the ideal of love that messed my mind up. I have to pray that I sit and be still, because I am soo sad right now, my eyes sting with tears, and I don't feel like eating. This means I have loved to hard, and need to let up on how I handle relatioships from now on. :-z
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 9:58am PDT
Report AbuseMichael,
I rarely call friends out, and I do consider you a friend.
Please do not pity me. Do not carry your heartache and sorrow around like it’s a burden to bare.
I don’t I never will. I will tell you like it is, brother. The mortgage companies, Obama, and the bank that hold the lien to my truck do not have pity for me and don’t say- “ well she has a handicapped child, let’s let her slide this month on her truck note.
I ask you not to feel for me. I carry the hardships in my life with pride and honor and I will never feel like I wish that I didn’t have them in my life.
You have pain from a love lost and I get that, I truly do. Be thankful, raise your head , dust your self off and just accept it.
Don’t worry about me. I will be just fine. I have lost both of my parents back to back, lost my home due to Hurricane Ike, and I am raising a handicapped child.
If I lost love, as You have, I would just be Damn thankful that I had f’n had it in the first place and I wouldn’t be doubting my decisions that were made.
Trust, Love and just be a Great man.
If you have a chance to show her that you love her, By God ‘s grace, you best do all that you can , because if you don’t, you have no one to blame but yourself.
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 12:11pm PDT
Report AbuseThat means alot to me coming from you. I've read alot of your comments and you are blunt. Always straight to the point to cut through all the bullsh@#. I really appreciate your comment. Alot of these guys on here follow behind these women like sick puppies or nuttless wonders. You are too cool. Thank you so much None.
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 12:12pm PDT
Report Abusetry, Just Live and learn
Watch your enemies burn
Put on a smile and laugh awhile
we are not here to walk a mile
in his shoes or in hers
wearing cowboy boots & spurs
Jiggle it and snap into a click
home is where the heart's mix
Love her with mercy and give your all
know your worth and head life's true call
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*clicking her heels three times saying " there's no place like home"
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 12:27pm PDT
Report AbuseThat means alot to a Man born in a place he can't call home. You are truly a sweetheart, while I'm building my own.
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 12:33pm PDT
Report Abusebrick by brick and stone by stone, side by side and never alone.
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 3:13pm PDT
Report Abusei know what you are saying it will get better as time goes on!
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Posted by Wed Oct 7, 2009 10:10pm PDT
Report Abusenice......michael.
do you know that you are not the one whos hurting.
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Posted by Thu Oct 8, 2009 1:00am PDT
Report AbuseThank you for your kind comments on my post, Michael...i do appreciate your input!! Your poems are very intense and profound...you have a great deal of talent...thank you for sharing!!
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