Can You Believe My Eyes, For I Can't As I Look At You?

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:50am PDT

  Ok, First I am going to address your " Hanging to your knees".

  My man has is blessed...so I doubt that we need to know this info.

  But if you blessed - congrats-

  I am happy beyond all doubts with my man's (body parts*****.)

  Second, Give up the selfish attitude.

  Your words not mine-

  "Lust for greed"

  This is a fantastic poem, don't get me wrong....its just TMI!

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:07am PDT

  I left you a new comment on your " Love Struck" post.

  I do like your poem....sorry for the typos...

  I meant to say that I am happy with my man's body parts!!

  keep writing!!

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  Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:15am PDT

  Everybody gets so stuck on body parts as if love is about standing next to each other all the time and smilling from the inside. Love is made up of outer and inner beauty. In this piece I depicted both. In short I'm actually going through the motions and thoughts of seeing a woman so strikingly beautiful in every way that it feels like hanging on the edge of existance just to meet her. Like a life changing experience. Love at first sight sounds crazy in this sane world where people are so scared to open up and feel the truth, because it looks better hidden and sounds better silenced. Love is adorned with all the beauty of nakedness, sex, feelings that are equally good and bad between the emotions of a single touch to not being able to feel that touch at all.

  I know exactly what my body parts are for and if you are in love aswell then it isn't that big of a secret or that much of a shock for a man to mention a body parts out of love and respect. I apollogize if this is viewed as vulgarity and disrespectful. I understand I shouldn't have expressed so much, but this is art and it just came out that way. In all openness an honesty, this is a complete thought from a male perspective... even though I fully understand and respect your opinions.

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:37am PDT

  She sounds like the love of your life. Forgive me for being so petty. I can appreciate your talents.

  You are right, I am in love. I am in love with a man that loves me back.

  I am so grateful for him.

  I should have realized your expressions were from an artistic standpoint.

  Please forgive me. I hope that the woman in your life cherishes you as much as I love the man in my life.

  You just made miss him and I am hurting for him as we speak.

  Thank you so much for responding. You have a true talent.

  If you love her as well as I am reading then she is the luckiest woman in the world.

  Hold on tight and never let her go.

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  Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:52am PDT

  Just to be totally clear. The penis refrence means I'm not limited to the size of my penis. I make love with everything in me. Now the mention of my balls is more along the lines of pride or a swelling of such as to say how different I feel knowing I might be able to trust a woman with something so delicate that it would crush me if damaged. A man with hurt pride is barely a man. That's why sex pills sell so good. Couples don't make love enough, because they are more content with itching a scratch... that brings me to " satisfying this hungry thirst beneath urges that lust for greed." Some sweet moments feel like an eternity. This is more about the driving desire that can't wait to be released. It's almost animal like, but true. To want something so strongly it doubles as a need... and the refrence to tears is like an uncontrollable, outburst of emotions. That's why I speak of them like they have a mind of thier own. Besides that I just wanted to let loose for a minute and have fun, like skinny dipping with words. It felt good to be free for a minute. Thank you for your comments.

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 11:57am PDT

  Michael,

  Forgive me!! I am blonde and just missing that wonderful man of mine.

  I should have read between the lines.

  I am so sorry. Forgive me for calling you selfish. I see what you meant now.

  I feel so bad. Please accept my full appologies.

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:04pm PDT

  Men are so complicated.

  How do I show the man that I love that I will always love him?

  You sound like you know alot about love.

  What can I do to show him that I will always be in love with him?

  I fear that he will see me or hear me crying because I miss him that I have stepped back in fears that he will think that I have doubts about " US".

  I do not doubt him. I just don't want him to worry about me and it may seem to him that I have stopped loving him.

  I haven't. I can't. How do I tell him things that I need to tell him that are extremely important without sounding like I am needy?

  I am strong but there are just topics such as emergencies that need to be discussed and I am scared to talk to him.

  any suggestions?

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  Posted by J Montana™ Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:16pm PDT

  I have to run out for a bit.

  I will check to see if you have any new posts or new responses when I return.

  Thanks again!

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  Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:19pm PDT

  Stop making a mountain out of a mole hill. Love is a two way street. To be the only giver is stalking, obsessive or posessive. If he feels as strongly for you as you do for him, just be open an honest. I'd rather live the truth than a lie. Don't hold it all and explode. Be more aware of the happiness in yourself beyond what the other person brings and if possible infuse the two when the time is right. Things happen as they must and the beat goes on. What else can you do but keep learning living and loving.

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  Posted by Sinister1 Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:01pm PDT

  i liked this i esspecially liked your comment about standing on the edge of existence. and if the girl makes you swell so you feel or aqctually are at your knees it didnt sound vulgar. you just trying to provide biggest bestest everything to the woman. I think its really romantic. thankyou for this read it was pleasant and pleasing

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