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Sunday, December 6, 2009

Heart Beat

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It was dark, it was cold,

There was no one, but my hopes

Out on my windows sat a nice dew

And in my mind silence with a dim glow

What is beating?

 Is it my heart?

Why it’s beating?

Is there a spark?

Why it’s dancing with all mooning lights???

Why it’s beating?

In this chilly night

Is it a wish trying to blast?

Or an illusion, of what sought in the past

Is it my dream turning to a gleam?

Barging out to light

In the midst of night

Or just my dreams are getting repacked,

 Out of no sight of any dim light

Hush, hush my heart,

Keep the beats down,

Don’t be so foul

Don’t sing it loud,

If it’s a wish coming so true,

 Or it’s a dream, living out the night

Keep it quiet and out of the sight

Don’t sing it loud, don’t dance so wowed

Let the morning light,

 Give it the fight,

 And make it thrive.

In my dark room,

 me and my dreams

We were planning for the coming spring

Longing for night to keep going on

I saw the light rush its way along  

I said to myself

Keep it quiet,

Don’t sing it loud

Don’t make a riot;

Before the morning light

Would take it out

Keep it in your heart

And dance in the night

And let the morning light

Think coming in twice



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  • urassismine2's Avatar
    Posted by urassismine2 Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:19am PDT

    You need to stop all of this duplication and be fair to others. We see you. All this does is piss people off, by pushing others messages out of the way. I needed to tell you that...Just a thought..

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  • tania_secret's Avatar
    Posted by tania_secret Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:27am PDT

    I tried to send the post more than once and i kept recieving an error that it was not posted, all of a sudden i see it posted several times.

    however, forgive me for that although i didnot do it on purpose.

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  • urassismine2's Avatar
    Posted by urassismine2 Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:28am PDT

    cool,..you write nice poetry..:)

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  • tania_secret's Avatar
    Posted by tania_secret Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:36am PDT

    thanks dear, i like your debates too.

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  • BryanB's Avatar
    Posted by BryanB Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:18am PDT

    it is so touching but why so supressed maybe you should let it out !!! you strugle to control but it will only lead to stress ... it is nature and natural ... listen to your heart andit can revile .. but use your mind it also can show you the way

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  • POETIC CHERRY LOVE's Avatar
    Posted by POETIC CHERRY LOVE Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:27am PDT

    THAT WAS VERY INTERESTING AND TOUCHING. I NEVER HEARD A POEM LIKE THAT BEFOR AN IM VERY GLAD THAT I TOOK THE TIME TO READ YOURS.

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  • tania_secret's Avatar
    Posted by tania_secret Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:22am PDT

    thanks dear cherry, it's a pleasure to have readers like you, thanks for your time.

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  • urassismine2's Avatar
    Posted by urassismine2 Thu Oct 22, 2009 12:28pm PDT

    Thank you, Tania...:)

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  • BryanB's Avatar
    Posted by BryanB Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:47pm PDT

    Think YOu Tinia... ;o)

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  • tania_secret's Avatar
    Posted by tania_secret Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:40pm PDT

    Dear Bryan read the poem again and you want say the same thing , it's not about holding back out of suppression, it's about taking the right step. I believe what comes easy goes easy, we have to control ourselves and make the right choices for our lives, and we have to think if what we believe we want is really what we need.

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