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Thursday, December 10, 2009

I really miss my son more than words can express.







Stop dreamin' and start breathin'.

This one step at a time. This aint a rhyme.

This more like attempting to pass the time.

Today and tomorrow seems like a long way off in my mind,

so I dread tonight being locked up in feelings that hurt to shine.

I'm an open flame,

but I'm burning so cold that I freeze rain.

My tears watch or they drop as they shatter around the pain.

They push and they pull. Sometimes it's like bleeding inside my brain,

where it hurts to remember all of the loses that led to drain.

If I couldn't change, then I might have died waiting to feel the same

under false hopes that live in my eyes screamin' my name.

These are deeper thoughts from a basis so lost I can't turn it off

and I'd change it back, but my time is a fact that remains to cross.

This that over love.

These words look as red as my burnin' blood.

When I see this screen tears fall on these keys that I couldn't budge,

though I can't type.  I keep telling these poets I can't write.

This aint art.  This the weight of my thoughts ev'ry Silent Knight.





By: The Silent Knight

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  • Loriel's Avatar
    Posted by Loriel Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:23pm PDT

    This is awesome!!!

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  • Katie's Avatar
    Posted by Katie Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:08pm PDT

    Its kinda sad. Okay you can write even though you say you can't and you are just doing it to pass time okay well you are good at writing to pass time!

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  • RyneishaB_05's Avatar
    Posted by RyneishaB_05 Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:34pm PDT

    Well if what I read of yours was just rambling then I can't wait to read ya real stuff lol ur a great writer all together...well I hope u get to see ur son real soon

    Ill be sure to check that other blog out as well...

    Ttyl

    Ill stop by soon!

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:12am PDT

    You really want to make me cry, huh?

    Quit!

    I feel your pain, my friend.

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:12am PDT

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iVxiHC9AJQw

    It's a beautiful day in this neighborhood,

    A beautiful day for a neighbor.

    Would you be mine?

    Could you be mine?...

    It's a neighborly day in this beauty wood,

    A neighborly day for a beauty.

    Would you be mine?

    Could you be mine?...

    I've always wanted to have a neighbor just like you.

    I've always wanted to live in a neighborhood with you.

    So, let's make the most of this beautiful day.

    Since we're together we might as well say:

    Would you be mine?

    Could you be mine?

    Won't you be my neighbor?

    Won't you please,

    Won't you please?

    Please won't you be my neighbor?

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:13am PDT

    Sing me a smile~*

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  • __A_YAHOO_USER__'s Avatar
    Posted by __A_YAHOO_USER__ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:23am PDT

    Michael,

    What happened to your son and why can't you see him?

    I was just wondering since it souns like you are in pain once again and seems you have lost sense of control in your life that is causing this pain and suffering. I do wish you the best and hope that things get better for you.

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  • Ginger's Avatar
    Posted by Ginger Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:17am PDT

    I really hope you get to see your son soon I will keep you and your son in my prayers

    With much love

    ginger

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  • __A_YAHOO_USER__'s Avatar
    Posted by __A_YAHOO_USER__ Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:13pm PDT

    Michael,

    my prayers are with you. I also responded to you on my site where you last posted.

    Chau,

    FC

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  • __A_YAHOO_USER__'s Avatar
    Posted by __A_YAHOO_USER__ Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:17pm PDT

    Michael,

    You are a good person inside and out and God will grant you your wish and I have confidence that he will make all your dreams and hopes come true sooner then you think. :)

    FC

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