You don't love me if you hurt me.
Wanting to change me is loving someone else.
Stalking me is a crime and someday you will do time.
Playing games with my mind and pretending to be kind.
Telling me lies and making me cry.
Hiding from me and not speaking to me.
Finding faults with me and constantly telling me,
does not say you love me.
Controlling me like a puppet on a string will never convince
me.
You don't love me if you are never with me.
And if you are not with me, than you must not love me.
If I'm not good enough for you than you don't love me.
Lowering my self esteem is just your little scheme.
But it still does not mean you love me.
Driving me crazy and making me totally dependent does not mean you
love me. The evil things that you have done to me will never
convince me that you love me.
Poetry: You don't love me.
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Posted by Fri Jul 10, 2009 4:19am PDT
Report Abusei thnk u nid to be more deep in term poetry make it to be like a deep session.........
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Posted by Sat Jul 11, 2009 5:16am PDT
Report AbuseThanks for your comment. I was not quite clear on what it meant. Deep? Enchanted Lisa
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Posted by Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:55am PDT
Report Abusewow nice words the worst or best part is i can relate to everything u wrote
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Posted by Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:02am PDT
Report AbuseThank you. I'm sure there are many of us that can relate to this. Enchanted Lisa
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Posted by Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:03am PDT
Report AbuseThank you. I'm sure there are many of us that can relate to this. Enchanted Lisa
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Posted by Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:00am PDT
Report Abusethe poem is ok but i think you can use more expressive words we need to not only get the picture but to feel it and to move us
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Posted by Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:41pm PDT
Report AbuseThanks Pattie, I think I can try using more expressive words.
Enchanted Lisa
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