Ok i didn't write this for myself. I wrote it for one of my
close friends. So I hope that ya'll enjoy it. Granted it is
kind of dark and suicidal at one point, it covers a very dark time
in one of my friends lives. Please let me know what you
think.....
Looking into your eyes;
I see so much, but I don't know what or why;
Why is life so full of surprise;
I've missed you alot;
You've missed so much and I have no clue what to say;
Besides where have you been anyway;
When you left you couldn't even say goodbye;
You left so fast and never looked back for me;
So Daddy whydid you have to leave me behind to cry;
I guess you just can't see;
What you've done to me;
So Daddy I guess this is goodbye;
Why did I have to love you;
They just don't feel the gap;
I just don't have a clue;
Why do I have to go through this crap;
I don't know what to feel;
Or how to deal with this;
When you left you never said goodbye;
Why'd you leave so fast and never look back for me;
Daddy why'd you leave me behind to cry;
I think that you're just gonna have to see;
What you've done to me;
Now I'm saying our final goodbye;
As I down this handful of pills;
I hope that it makes you feel this pain;
Now as you watch me lay here;
Youknow the end is near;
I bet you never thought it so hard to say good bye;
Well I guess that I just sealed the deal;
As I lay here and die;
So after all this time we won't feel the pain of goodbye
again;
Cause Daddy this is my final goodbye;
Now there's no more pain;
You'll never know it again, And now you have no-one left to
blame;
So Daddy goodbye.
I hope that ya'll like this........
" Bitter-Sweet Good-bye"
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Posted by Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:43pm PST
Report AbuseVery deep and very sad. Overall a very good poem because we all know not all poems are lovey dovey and some like this, are meant to reach and touch apart of you that the world never sees.
I liked it very much.
T
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Posted by Tue Nov 24, 2009 10:47pm PST
Report AbuseDear Hutch;
The poem you wrote for your friend, is very moving...my friend.
You must have had a close bond with your friend, to be able to interject such emotion for another. Is your close friend still in your life. I do hope he truely didn't harm himself!!
You are a deep young man...i am glad i have the privlege of getting to know you....and look forward to many years to come.HAVE A FANTASTIC THANKSGIVING....dear heart!!!
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Posted by Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:37am PST
Report AbuseMORNING BABE =)
WOW THIS IS SAD!
IS THIS REAL? DID YOU REALLY WRITE IT FOR YOU FRIEND?
WELL MY FRIEND I HAVE BEEN GOOD JST STRESS AND MORE STRESS AND THEN IN PAIN! LOL
BUT OTHER THEN THAT I HAVE BEEN GOOD HAHA!!!
THE PLANS FOR TURKEY DAY ARE GOOD, THERE ARE GOING TO BE LOTS OF FOOD! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THAT HAHAH!
I WENT TO GO SEE 2012 AND I HATED IT.. DIDN'T LIKE IT I WANTED TO WALK OUT BUT SINCE THE I PAID MONEY FOR IT THERE WAS NO POINT HEHE!
THEN LAST NIGHT I WENT TO GO SEE TWILIGHT (NEW MOON) I LOVED IT
HOW HAVE YOU BEEN?
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Posted by Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:39pm PST
Report AbuseA very sad poem but it is good.
Pain can be so blinding that we think we will hurt them but the truth is we're only hurting ourselves.
I do hope your friend is better now.
Have a nice Thanksgiving peace.
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Posted by Wed Nov 25, 2009 3:07pm PST
Report AbuseHi Hutch, May you and your friend, stay in peace, in Gods eyes you are both special. have a wonderful Thanksgiving
thanks for comming to my post
Your friend serenity
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Posted by Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:41am PST
Report AbuseGOOD MORNING THERE BOY HOW WAS YOU TURKEY DAY? OR SHOULD I SAY FISHING DAY LOL!
LOL IM ALMOST DONE SEEN ALL THE MOVIES I WANTED TO SEE... ALL I NEED TO SEE IS PLANT 51 MIGHT TAKE MY BABY TODAY OR NEXT WEEK CUZ I THINK WE ARE GOING TO PUT THE X-MAS LIGHTS AND TREE UP AS A LITTLE FAMILY...LOL!
MY TURKEY DAY WAS ALSOME HAD LOTS OF FOOD....MMMM YUMMY...LOL
IM SORRY TO HEAR ABOUT YOU FRIEND BUT I HOPE THEY ARE DOING FEEL!
MUCH LOVE
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Posted by Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:46pm PST
Report Abusehutch new post when you have time thanks
your friend serenity
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Posted by Sat Nov 28, 2009 5:40pm PST
Report AbuseDeep!
But what is deep without a dark side anyway..I like the poem Hutch.
Hope your holidays are going well.
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Posted by Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:21pm PST
Report AbuseIt is good and you have a way with words and music. :)
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