USER POST: MAKE IT GO AWAY(poem)

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  Posted by VeeBee Sat Nov 21, 2009 6:33am PST

  If you love someone let it go, if it comes back... its meant for you for sure!

  It sounds like the love you have for someone else is great but you also feel that you are giving up your own freedom and perhaps even personal happiness. I say let it go and if he/she is still there for you when you complete your own personal journey then it is "true love."

  Beautifully written! Thank you :)

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  Posted by Sleep Sat Nov 21, 2009 7:25am PST

  This poem is SO HOT. I applaud you. Outstanding. I think you said what a lot of us feel. Thank you.

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  Posted by HOPE Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:51am PST

  R u talking about Me!!!!!!!!!!! If so, you are in my head...It's AWESOME.

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  Posted by GracieGraciaGrace Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:45am PST

  It's really nice:)

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  Posted by HONEYBEE Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:03pm PST

  i am a true poem writtanr, and i reado others as well and i must say this one is hot :)

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  Posted by Sandra Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:45pm PST

  I am in the same place at the same time.... Good luck sweetheart!

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  Posted by Laura Sat Nov 21, 2009 2:38pm PST

  Thanks for the comments.It's nice to hear feedback. I think writing is therapeutic. You can check out my blog to see others I've posted.

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  Posted by sisterzela Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:15am PST

  now that is some deep stuff!!!

  either i wrote this, or somebody that was very dear to me did.

  whatever the case, hopefully a lesson was learned, and that's the only purpose it should have.

  no overs, because some people will never change, and as good as this poem may be, this person will do it again, and just write another poem to get out of that situation.

  just beware...............

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  Posted by Laura Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:39am PST

  16 years and never cheated...just like to write to clear my head but thanks for the comments.

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  Posted by Amber L Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:43am PST

  just had my heartbroken.........if he would have seen your poem,which is amazing by the way,prior to the devestating lies he tried to feed me,it would have made the hurt soo much less. i am 28 he is 20(i shoulda known better

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